ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Literature Text
Forever.
He said.
We'd last.
United as waters converging as one.
Dissonance-
Water bodies. Crashing against the shore-
Rain. Crashing onto the Earth's surface-
Raindrops. Sliding off cold, hard surfaces-
Breaking off.
Forever...
He said.
We'd last.
United as waters converging as one.
Dissonance-
Water bodies. Crashing against the shore-
Rain. Crashing onto the Earth's surface-
Raindrops. Sliding off cold, hard surfaces-
Breaking off.
Forever...
Suggested Collections
Insincere, superficial beings.
© 2010 - 2024 Smintie
Comments2
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
I love the line, "United as waters converging as one." It's an intruiging metaphor.
The short, staccato lines really emphasis how the narrator feels detached after the break-up. I like it.
The short, staccato lines really emphasis how the narrator feels detached after the break-up. I like it.